Below Expectations
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Progressing
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Proficient
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Exemplary
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Score
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The rewrite was not completed.
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The rewrite was completed, but there were minimal changes. Student may have included three acts and a logline.
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The rewrite was finished and posted. The 3 acts were well organized. The logline explained the story.
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The rewrite was an improved edited version of the previous 3 acts and a logline. The outline clearly stated flowed.
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Proficient 3
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Student does not consider specific choices within the piece and their effect on the piece as a whole.
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Student attempts to consider the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student considers the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student uses specific artistic choices to give the entire piece meaning. These choices are intentional and meaningful.
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Exemplary 4
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Title
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Student does not consider specific choices within the piece and their effect on the piece as a whole.
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Student attempts to consider the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student considers the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student uses specific artistic choices to give the entire piece meaning. These choices are intentional and meaningful.
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Exemplary 4
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Credits
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Student does not consider specific choices within the piece and their effect on the piece as a whole.
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Student attempts to consider the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student considers the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student uses specific artistic choices to give the entire piece meaning. These choices are intentional and meaningful.
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Exemplary 4
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Text
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Student does not consider specific choices within the piece and their effect on the piece as a whole.
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Student attempts to consider the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student considers the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student uses specific artistic choices to give the entire piece meaning. These choices are intentional and meaningful.
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Exemplary 4
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Color
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Student does not consider specific choices within the piece and their effect on the piece as a whole.
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Studentattempts to consider the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student considers the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student uses specific artistic choices to give the entire piece meaning. These choices are intentional and meaningful.
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Proficient 3
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Characters
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Student does not address the specific choices within the piece and their effect on the piece as a whole
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Student attempts to consider the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student considers the specific artistic choices seen in the piece and attempts to use these elements to provide meaning within the piece as a whole.
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Student uses specific artistic choices to give the entire piece meaning. These choices are intentional and meaningful.
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Exemplary 4
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Story
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The story is unclear. The audience and purpose are not stated or not clear.
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The story is stated. The intended audience and purpose may or may not be clear.
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The flows smoothly from one idea to another. The intended audience and purpose are clear.
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The story is artfully stated flows smoothly from one idea to another. The intended audience and purpose are clear.
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Exemplary 4
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Friday, May 29, 2015
Student Assessment of Project
Thursday, May 21, 2015
Friday, May 8, 2015
Story Rewrites
THE PARTY
Log line: Mr. Gatsby is a secretive man. What will happen when three people go back in time and uncover his past? Will they tell his secrets and dismantle his facade?
Characters:
Kevin- Max
Kara- Ellie
Imani- Lily
Act 1: (starts at Max's House on a three way phone call with Ellie and Lily)
Max: Hey guys! Are you done getting ready for tonight? (fixes his tie)
Ellie: Yeah, I'm so excited (looks through her closet)
Lily: Me too! I am almost ready! (fixes her hair)
Max: Okay, I will be on my way to pick you guys up.
Lily & Ellie: Thanks Max! See you then. ( hanging up the phone)
Act 2: (everyone is in Max's car headed to the party)
Lily: I am very curious about this, Gatsby. (furrowing her eyebrows in confusion)
Ellie: Yeah, isn't it odd that we know nothing about him?
Max: Relax guys, no one knows him that well. He's (stops to think)
a mystery.
Lily: Hmm, I wish I could figure him out.
Ellie: I wonder what his past was like!
Max: Can you all just be excited for the party and stop with all your investigative questions? He's a private man, let him be. I'm sure he is just like the rest of us.
Act 3: (Currently at Mr. Gatsby's house party)
Ellie: This house is beautiful. Look at the vintage paintings!
Max: This is the best party I have seen in years! ( raising his voice)
Lily: Let's go get some refreshments.
Max: Good idea Lily! (Getting excited)
Ellie:(After gulping down the last bit of her drink) I wonder if Gatsby is actually here.
Lily: I don't know but I feel dizzy!
Max: Yeah me too!
Ellie: Is the room spinning?
(Lily, Max, and Ellie are stuck in a spinning room and began to rise through a tornado like portal)
Friday, May 1, 2015
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